He spun around and dropped to the ground, crying out as his clutched his suddenly bleeding shoulder. should be he
"Hunting!" he replied, scooping up the wounded Kris' stunner and running in a zig-zag pattern towards the copse. What is a copse? (sorry don't know...)
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Woah, nice one =)
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PS: found some ... a typo:
He spun around and dropped to the ground, crying out as his clutched his suddenly bleeding shoulder.
should be he
"Hunting!" he replied, scooping up the wounded Kris' stunner and running in a zig-zag pattern towards the copse.
What is a copse? (sorry don't know...)