Up again... yay for back ache that won't let me sleep... not!
First off... loved hearing a bit about the physiology of wazagans... hmmm sleeping so deeply they need chemicals to wake up in an emergency... wish I was like that. Nez's recital of some of her gods apon waking made me lol... reminded me of one of my patients who sat up out of the blue one night... sang 'Johnny fell down the well' followed by all of the commandments before dropping back off to sleep again. But what a nasty rebound at the end of five hours. I REALLY hope you use this somewhere in your nano.
Loved Nez's observations about ferin behaviour... right on the money, she knows her stuff.
Loved Teri throwing his weight around to get clearance to land.
My fav bit was the White Knight coming in for a landing through the rain and Meribeth stepping out of the cockpit. She succeeded in her goal of restoring it and using it to help her uncle's people. (Must change the bathroom system though... 52 hours... ewww! (How much time has past since the arguement in the hanger?)
Aiye! And there's my little doe. Given the last scene I wrote with her in it (which I haven't posted yet because I'm slack) this sounds like a last ditch effort to save her life, given that Rexanna has foregone the usual legalities of shipping a rescued ferin off Brightstone. (If you want the scene I can email it.)
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First off... loved hearing a bit about the physiology of wazagans... hmmm sleeping so deeply they need chemicals to wake up in an emergency... wish I was like that. Nez's recital of some of her gods apon waking made me lol... reminded me of one of my patients who sat up out of the blue one night... sang 'Johnny fell down the well' followed by all of the commandments before dropping back off to sleep again. But what a nasty rebound at the end of five hours. I REALLY hope you use this somewhere in your nano.
Loved Nez's observations about ferin behaviour... right on the money, she knows her stuff.
Loved Teri throwing his weight around to get clearance to land.
My fav bit was the White Knight coming in for a landing through the rain and Meribeth stepping out of the cockpit. She succeeded in her goal of restoring it and using it to help her uncle's people. (Must change the bathroom system though... 52 hours... ewww! (How much time has past since the arguement in the hanger?)
Aiye! And there's my little doe. Given the last scene I wrote with her in it (which I haven't posted yet because I'm slack) this sounds like a last ditch effort to save her life, given that Rexanna has foregone the usual legalities of shipping a rescued ferin off Brightstone. (If you want the scene I can email it.)