ext_153462 ([identity profile] mjkj.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jeriendhal 2011-01-19 09:09 pm (UTC)

Wow...

heavy...

I still do not see why they need as close a connection as possible when she wakes up...

mjkj

PS: suspected typo:
"Vix, step out of the doe's line of sight, please," the First One muttered softly to her. Nan took up position at the head of the operating table, where the little doe could see her. => from the context I would say the last part should read: where the little doe could not see her.

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