jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
jeriendhal ([personal profile] jeriendhal) wrote2013-07-30 06:24 am
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I don't actually have scenes or full stories attached to these yet, but I want to use them someday.

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"Who did you hurt, that made you so afraid of your own strength?"

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"You think she (Note: a waitress at a diner) is beneath you?"

"Of course she's beneath me. I could make a phone call less than thirty seconds long and destroy her life utterly. Make her jobless, homeless, friendless, dropping her into a spiral of debt and loss that she could never possibly pull herself out of. But would be the point? A moment's petty revenge for a badly served coffee?"

"Some people wouldn't hesitate. Your colleagues for instance."

"My colleagues have no sense of perspective, imagining themselves gods because they're able to step on ants. I aim for bigger prey."

"And the waitress?"

He smiled. "Her name is Margie Haskill. She's twenty-four, unmarried, has four siblings, one mother, an unknown father, and is working on a nursing and psychology degree to treat needy children. She's likely surly because she spent all night studying for a test she had to take this morning."

"You know this?"

"This isn't my first time here. I make a study of people you see. Miss Haskill is an ant, but an industrious one. She's attempting to make the world better, which is more than can be said for 99% of humanity. I think she will be pleased to find when she graduates that an unexpected scholarship has paid off her student loans."

"You'd do this for her?"

"It would take a thirty second phone call." He smiled again. "Some people crush ants. Others... build ant farms."

[identity profile] harvey-rrit.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
God, I HATE it when I come up with something that good and don't have a story to wrap around it!

You have my deepest sympathy.

[identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Now if I just figure where the hell IFtC is going...

[identity profile] drakemagi.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
I'm amazed! I love the last three sentences!

[identity profile] shadur.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that second bit and would be very interested in buying a story about that person. He strikes me as somewhat similar to a very old character of mine from yea long ago -- basically, dragon predating the Christian Epoch, tended to travel the world, fairly recently decided to reinvent himself as a CEO and start improving life in various subtle ways because being rich doesn't do anything for him anymore and ruling directly doesn't sound very interesting at all...

[identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed. It doesn't help that I keep imagining his voice sounding like Tony Jay

[identity profile] resonant.livejournal.com 2013-10-14 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I just bought "The Incrementalists" (haven't read it yet, I'm saving it), and I hope that it turns out to be like this.

[identity profile] lilfluff.livejournal.com 2013-10-14 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, now that looks like an interesting book.