Feedback, wheee....

Got the first note back from one of my D&D beta-readers. Overall he seemed to like it, though he noted some poor punchlines, and a little bit of gender-confusion on the part of Tez. Also, he was looking forward to more Jeremy-Isolde interaction, which is something I can probably give him in the next script.

I think I may end up scrapped the "Isolde Goes to Tez's Place" script, since it doesn't seem to be going anywhere. Sorry fangirls, your views of Shirtless Tez may be fewer than I was anticipating in this series. :(