Red Vixen, plot directions
Sep. 4th, 2008 11:22 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
jeriendhalDebating on where to start the next scene. I'm not sure if I want Rolas to tell the latest news to Melika and get some comfort or move on straight to his confrontation with the Countess.
I'm also not particularly happy with the fight scene with Rolas and Hotclaw. It comes across as too contrived, and Rolas seems like a bully. May have to set it aside and rewrite it later.
I'm also not particularly happy with the fight scene with Rolas and Hotclaw. It comes across as too contrived, and Rolas seems like a bully. May have to set it aside and rewrite it later.
