Prisoners of War, final update
Jul. 28th, 2010 10:47 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
jeriendhalConclusion is here
And I can safely conclude that as the sex comedy I'd intended, it came out as an abject failure. While Rufus and Hazel's bits worked, Melika turned into a fairly harsh character and Rolas is just too damned dour under the best of circumstances. I think I'm going to have to live with the fact that my funny pieces are never going to be long pieces. My stories keep drifting into Deadly Serious mode if I keep them going too long.
And I can safely conclude that as the sex comedy I'd intended, it came out as an abject failure. While Rufus and Hazel's bits worked, Melika turned into a fairly harsh character and Rolas is just too damned dour under the best of circumstances. I think I'm going to have to live with the fact that my funny pieces are never going to be long pieces. My stories keep drifting into Deadly Serious mode if I keep them going too long.
