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With Teal's Bargain now available in electronic format as of yesterday, I may as well keep track of how it's selling, especially since Smashwords has those lovely graphs to show me.

So far:

Pageviews: 25
Samples Downloaded: 4
Sales: Zip

Well, at least someone is looking at it...

You didn't ask for it, but...

Date: 2011-01-09 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ankewehner.livejournal.com
There's a missing word right in the first paragraph - "swallowing it down and feeling it come to rest like lead at the bottom of her belly."

"In the daylight she would be able to see for miles around, or stare at the steep, near impassable stone cliff face thethat guarded the dragon’s lair."

"Even her magic was pitifully small, capable only of producing simple illusions, easily pieced pierced by the Beast’s gaze."

Regarding the lute strings, "cats gut" apparently should be "catgut", going by Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Catgut

"The silk rope had run out high above her, leaving her no means of support if she misstepped." (Or with one p, take your pick.)

"Get up, else you be found!" I think that should either be "else you'll be found" or "lest you be found"

"a slab sided piece of rock" Flat sided piece of rock? Slab of rock?

"But it was the dragon, of that she had no doubt." Next sentence, "It had taken Teal two hours..."

"It had been her master’s own instrument, when he had been a journeyman bard."

Re: You didn't ask for it, but...

Date: 2011-01-09 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Sighs and makes note to fix. Thanks

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