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Tez hadn't thought much of it when he found Andrea hunched over a leather bound tome in his manor's library. The sixteen year old half-breed enjoyed stories, but was more a determined than adept reader. Practice would do her good.

When he found her in the same position five hours later, he frowned deeply, calling, "Andrea! You have duties to attend!"

She didn't look up. He suddenly realized she wasn't looking at anything, though tears ran down her face. Tez looked at the open page and began to read…

Andrea limped down the path, the monsters still at her heels…

Date: 2013-03-01 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natf.livejournal.com
The sixteen year half-breed enjoyed stories

Should that be 'The sixteen-year-old half-breed' ?

Date: 2013-03-01 06:57 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-03-03 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadur.livejournal.com
... Yike.

... Also, that last sentence probably should say "Andrea ran limply down the path..." or something like...

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