Lines I Mean to Use, But Don't
Sep. 17th, 2014 02:47 pmFor whatever reason I've got a couple of pieces of dialog in my head that have been sitting there for years and I've never been able to place them in any of my stories.
(Protagonists are about to do/encounter something obviously dangerous)
ProtagOne: This is going to hurt a little, isn't it?
ProtagTwo: Oh, no. I imagine it's going to hurt enormously
(Protagonist just survived said painful encounter)
ProtagTwo: Can you get up?
ProtagOne: Do I absolutely have to?
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Does anyone else ever have this problem?
(Protagonists are about to do/encounter something obviously dangerous)
ProtagOne: This is going to hurt a little, isn't it?
ProtagTwo: Oh, no. I imagine it's going to hurt enormously
(Protagonist just survived said painful encounter)
ProtagTwo: Can you get up?
ProtagOne: Do I absolutely have to?
* * *
Does anyone else ever have this problem?
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Date: 2014-09-17 09:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-17 11:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-18 01:57 am (UTC)"You can only explain things patiently to people so many times before you want to hang the next man who digs a well downhill from the cemetery."
I find posting these things under What? relieves a lot of the pressure. Not all.
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Date: 2014-09-20 01:15 am (UTC)