Returned to Life, the Complete Story

[jeriendhal]

For those who want to read Returned to Life in bigger chunks than the snippets I've been posting here, I've placed the complete story on DeviantArt. Enjoy.

Part One

Part Two

Part Three

Comments

[glenbarnett.livejournal.com]

I hadn't been reading before, but thought I might have a look.

To begin with I scrolled to the bottom of the first link (to see whether or not it hand some indication of how to find the next part there as well, so I wouldn't have to keep LJ open when I got to the end of part 1), and I noticed that the first part ended like this:

"Terinu was mouthing silen

©2006 *Sir-Talen "

Is it supposed to end mid-word like that?

[jeriendhal.livejournal.com]

(sigh) No it isn't. Evidentially I was pushing the limit of how much prose DA will allow in one file. It's fixed now. Part One should end with Rufus saying "Quite right, quite right."