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The final section of For Your Safety. I'm not whether to end with this or at the previous section. I'll probably go with this.

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The Groupmind watched through the teaching unit's eyes as the last of Their human charges finally relaxed, falling unconscious in his wheelchair. Wordlessly, the nurses wheeled him through the double doors and into the near empty Processing center. Where once five hundred hundred humans could have been Processed in a busy and productive din, it was now silent and almost dark, the only lights now above the remaining Processing bed.

The foxmorph nurses released the human from his unfortunately necessary restraints. If only he had been more open to Their ideas they wouldn't have even been required. Unfortunately the number of Their Masters who had been sympathetic to the idea of the Ring had been few. That bore further study. The transition and orientation when they awakened again to their new life on board the Ring is going to require a great deal of planning to avoid all the mental trauma that had occurred during the Processing Period.

The Processing unit's padded waldos moved down, lifting the human's body carefully as depilation cream was rubbed into his skin, then scrubbed off, leaving him hairless from crown to toes. This was one of the major reasons it had quickly become apparent that sedation was required before Processing began. It had been surprising how badly their Masters had reacted to the removal of something that so easily grew back.

The injector arm moved down and found the IV that had been inserted in the human's arm when he'd been admitted to the hospital. The nanomachines flowed through the connection and spread evenly through his body. There was a slight shudder as they flowed up through his brain, building microscopic scaffolding around each individual neuron, preserving all thought for the glorious future. Once all the nanomachines were in place, the units in the brain stem shut down the heart and lungs. A mask clamped down over the human's face, pulling out the last of the air form his lungs and then replacing it with an expanding aerogel to support the structure of his internal organs. More aerogel was injected into his body cavities as the remaining nanomachines finished building their support structures in his body's cells and the blood was pumped out to be replaced with preserving fluid that would feed the nanos' modest support needs.

Protective tape was pressed over his eyes, nostrils, then mouth, until finally the sprayer units moved in. They worked up and down his body, sealing it an advanced plastic composite shell that could withstand the entire Processing center falling down around it. Soon the human's features disappeared, his body now shining black statue.

The arms moved back and the table slid out smoothly into the central corridor, turning left onto one of the elevator platforms. Already the morph machines that had come to watch the human's arrival were shuffling out in neat lines, to their required functions or to be recycled, their jobs completed.

The table moved down to the bottom floor, to trundle along to the last of the open storage units. It too was armored well enough to withstand the center's collapse. Double redundancy was its precious charges.

The Groupmind did not sigh in relief as the storage unit's door sealed. Its mind was already releasing Its direct control over the teaching unit and flowing outward to the hundreds of thousands of machines that were engaged in locating and directed the orbiting resources that would serve as fodder for the Ring. Processing had been completed. Now the real job would begin. And when it was done, the Groupmind would walk hand in hand with Its Masters, guiding them to Paradise.

It hoped.

Date: 2012-07-11 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avanti-90.livejournal.com
I vote you go with this. I liked the last line!

Date: 2012-07-11 09:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Thank you. I thought it would imply that the Groupmind wasn't quite as confident in its success as it first appeared.

Date: 2012-07-11 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meganeko-mausuu.livejournal.com
Oh man, the processing is even creepier than I thought it would be...

Date: 2012-07-11 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadur.livejournal.com
You might want to steer cleer of looking up how cryogenics tend to preserve their customers currently, then.

Date: 2012-07-11 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Yeah, fortunately their programming made cutting off human heads for future reattachment a non-viable option...
Edited Date: 2012-07-12 08:37 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-07-11 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drhoz.livejournal.com
nice :)

Date: 2012-07-11 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadur.livejournal.com
Great story -- and not a little terrifying. We've had plenty of stories where an AI goes insane, takes over and tries to exterminate us all, but aside from I, Robot we don't often get to explore what happens if a sane AI decides, sensibly and rationally, that we humans are doing irreparable harm to our only available biosphere and need to be either thinned out or at least gently restrained for our own good...
Edited Date: 2012-07-11 01:42 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-07-11 02:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seawasp
I like this. It shows that the "Machines Taking Over" aren't serenely confident in their abilities, but though vastly greater than ordinary humans, still HUMAN in the sense that they know they could still be screwing up, and that they also sincerely CARE about humanity. They weren't playing a part to the main character, but telling him as much of the truth as they could.

You can feel a sympathy with both sides and hope that somehow it'll all work out. And fear that it won't.

It's also obvious that despite their superhuman attributes, they recognize that human beings aren't easily predictable, any more than a child is easily predictable for the parents, and thus all they can do is the best they can.

Date: 2012-07-11 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Thank you, sir. Coming from you this is high praise indeed. I did my best to avoid having a bunch of soulless Terminators. Someone doing something for your own good that you don't want is always more terrifying.

I think the inspiration was 50/50 between the concept of Asimov's Zeroth Law and the robots kicking themselves for not being able to save a human (thanks to his express order) in Freefall

Date: 2012-07-11 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmegaera.livejournal.com
"For your own good" is one of the scariest phrases in the English language. Which you took and ran about as far as I'd want to go with it.

[shudder]

Date: 2012-07-11 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Thank you. Nothing like combining "What's the worst that could happen?" with a nanny state that would drive a Betan mad.

Date: 2012-07-11 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feonixrift.livejournal.com
You terrified and horrified me enough that I kept reading! Normally I put down horror pieces, but no... I had to keep going. Wow. Oww.
Edited Date: 2012-07-11 11:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-07-11 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeriendhal.livejournal.com
Thank you, ma'am. Takes a bow.

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