jeriendhal: (For Your Safety)
 

Just a few inspirations (positive and negative) that helped create the For Your Safety universe.



Books


I, Robot (1950). Isaac Asimov. The starting point for popularization of the concept of benevolent robots, introducing Asimov’s famous “Three Laws of Robotics.” Most of the short stories within are mysteries, pointing out the flaws and loopholes of the Three Laws, which admittedly undermines their utility for the Groupmind.


Caves of Steel (1953), Isaac Asimov. On an overpopulated Earth (8 billion, a half billion less than that of 2017), humanity is stuffed into overcrowded cities and most humans suffer from severe agoraphobia. When a prominent Spacer ambassador is murdered, police detective Elijah Baley must solve the murder, with the unwanted assistance of R. Daneel Olivaw, a Spacer robot built to be indistinguishable from a human. Like most of Asimov's stories it’s a “Fair Play” mystery, with the clues laid out for the reader. Caves is followed by several sequels of decreasing quality, which eventually introduced the “Zeroth Law” of robotics, allowing robots to permit some humans to die (not to mention all those pesky alien races).


The Humanoids (1947), Jack Williamson. The other side of the robotics coin, Williamson’s Humanoids are sleek black androids with an overriding mission to make humanity happy and safe. If by “safe” you mean being locked in a padded room with soft toys, and by “happy” being lobotomized so you don’t have any negative thoughts, or any thoughts at all. A prime example of what the Groupmind is dearly trying to avoid.


Ringworld (1970), Larry Niven. If you can ignore the super science, wonky worldbuilding, and painful misogyny, the concept of the Ring, a rotating space station thousands of miles wide and the circumference of the Earth’s orbit around the Sun, is a genuinely classic science fiction concept. It should be no surprise that it inspired the idea of the (smaller, but still pretty darned big) FYS Ring, a construct that merely circles around the Earth.


Voyage From Yesteryear (1982), James P. Hogan. After a devastating nuclear war, the reformed American government sends out a colony ship to Alpha Centauri to rightfully take control of the colony already there, sent before the war by the UN to insure human survival. What they find are Chironian humans raised from embryos by their benevolent robot caretakers, who politely poke holes in all of their conqueror's assumptions.


One of the first novels to examine what a Post Scarcity society might be like, while poking fun at Reagan era nationalism. Like Ringworld, some of the gender discussions are very, um, products of their time (Chironian women are mostly seen as being very approachable, to put it mildly), and I disagree severely with Chironian approach to mental health, but otherwise a good novel.


The Vorkosigan Saga (1986 to 2016), Lois McMaster-Bujold. Bujold’s beloved and long-running space opera may not have much to do with the core concepts of FYS (AI’s and humanoid robots don’t exist for starters) but the humanism, rationality, and cleverness of the characters inform my own writing quite a bit.



Television


The Prisoner (1967-68). Patrick Mcgoohan's brilliant, paranoid, and psychedelic short series about the titular Prisoner, a former British intelligence agent held against his will in The Village, a pleasant seaside resort that he will learn to enjoy and he most certainly will not ever escape. Almost everything about the Ring, from the faux pleasant surroundings, the constant surveillance, to the cheerful creepiness of the morphs is at least partly inspired by this series.


Person of Interest (2011-16). What starts out as a “Victim of the Week” mystery series with a mild sci-fi premise, morphs over the course of five seasons into a clever cyberpunk thriller about a war between a benevolent AI called The Machine, it’s creator and allies, and the forces of Samaritan, another AI who wishes to conquer humanity as much as The Machine wants to save it. While I started writing the first FYS story well before I was aware of the show, much of its core concepts about ubiquitous surveillance and the creation of a powerful AI run in parallel to FYS.



RPG’s


Transhuman Space (2002), Steve Jackson Games. This  massive RPG setting, filled with super bioscience and ubiquitous artificial intelligences, inspired some of FYS’ Post-Scarcity sensibilities, and the dangers of constant surveillance. It also provides the name of FYS’ morphs, though not all of THS’s are necessarily Furry.



Webcomics


Freefall (1998-Current), Mark Stanley. Stanley’s massive, long running serio-comic follows the adventures of Sam, a squid-like alien living on the human colony world of Jean, and Florence, an uplifted Red Wolf working as the engineer on Sam’s ship. In between Sam’s thieving antics and Florence’s deadpan reactions is a remarkable hard science fiction story about the nature of robotic AI’s and free will.


A Miracle of Science (2002-07), Jon Kilgannon and Mark Sachs. In a world where becoming a mad scientist is recognized as a legitimate mental illness (Science Related Memetic Disorder), police detective Benjamin Prester and Martian agent Caprice Quivillion must team up to stop Dr. Virgil Haas from unleashing a robot takeover of the Solar System, while also saving Haas and Prester from their own demons.


A strong influence on FYS, Mars is both a planet and a massive distributed AI, existing in the minds of all Martian robots and humans, and remaining remarkably benevolent.


jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
So what do you call a fanfic based off a webcomic based off an out of copyright Superman cartoon?

Me neither.

Inspired by Brian Fies' webcomic The Last Mechanical Monster.

The Last Mechanical Monster and related concepts, characters, and images are copyright Brian Fies and used here without permission.

Story behind the cut. )
jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
Been actually reading a couple of webcomics outside my usual haunts, both of which are bit outside the usual venue of either Slice of Life or Sci-Fi/Fantasy.


First off is The Last Mechanical Monster, an Eisner nominated strip written and drawn by Brian Fies, creator of "Mom's Cancer" and "Whatever Happened to the World of Tomorrow." The premise is simple: The unnamed, tuxedo wearing villain of the classic Fleischer Studios Superman cartoon "The Mechanical Monsters" is finally out of prison after serving a 65 year sentence for creating an army of flying robots to... rob jewelry stores.

It's 2005, he's 99 years old, and most of his robots are still sitting in a ball of metal in his old lair, but he's got just enough parts to recreate one more...

Assuming he can purchase antique vacuum tubes on store credit.

This is a fascinating comic, riffing off a classic cartoon, which fortunately is in the public domain. It's low on action (especially given that "Sparky" is too old for gymanstics these days) but it's a well written character piece that I've been enjoying, and builds on the Sensawunder that old sci-fi and comic books could bring.



The second comic I've been reading is the recently concluded Alone Together, written and drawn by Steven Gallacci, most widely known for his classic sci-fi comic Erma Felna EDF. This time around the story revolves around two soldiers, Cadet Danni, a first year Imperial Army officer cadet, and Sgt. Jerom, a veteran Flight Sergeant from the opposing side. Danni finds herself trapped on a desert island when her training unit is attacked and retreats hastily, leaving her behind, presumed dead.

A year later during an extended ceasefire, Jerom lands his plane on the island after experiencing mechanical trouble, and finds Danni much the worse for wear psychologically for her long isolation. Together the young cadet and the grizzled sergeant, not knowing each other's language, must find common ground and survive against threats on the island and from outside. Because the cease fire is on shaky ground and Danni's empire may be about to undergo a revolution...

Gallacci writes a realistic portrait of two soldiers with vastly different life experiences trying to find common ground and peace in their lives.

The fact that one is a female rabbit and the other a sawed off mouse is pretty much secondary...

Both Highly Recommended.
jeriendhal: (Mayhem)
"...Not the brightest idea to threaten a kid in front of his mum. Especially when she has fangs and claws."

If you like sci-fi, or webomics, and you're not reading [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta's webcomic Terinu, there's something wrong with you.
jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
After four long years of hiatus, [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta is posting new pages to her science fiction webcomic Terinu. Current update schedule is once a week so she doesn't run through her margin too quickly. Come on over and give it the love it deserves!
jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
Courtesy of today's Freefall

"Fear vs. Hope. Hardly an even match."

"That's because you think of hope as something light and fragile. My version of hope has calluses and dirt under its fingernails and isn't past bringing brass knuckles to a fight."
jeriendhal: (For Your Safety)
Because I've crossed over [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta's Terinu with everything else, I may as well with my stories.

If the Varn Dominion showed up in Earth's system after humanity was transferred to the Ring, both sides might have a bit of a dilemma. The Varn would appreciate the Groupmind's dedication to cleaning up the Earth's environment, and obviously the Ring represents a significant leap in materials technology from the Dominion's standard. OTOH the Groupmind AI they'd only regard as a threat, particularly after it poo-poo's the idea of Varn godhead.

Gripping Hand, the Groupmind itself would prefer to have peaceable relations with the Varn, but it's got too many alien invasion movies in its archives not to be suspicious of Varn motives. And given its cavalier willingness to sacrifice its own sentient morph AI's for humanity's sake, I'm not sure exterminating the Varn, Ferin, Creo, Galen, and the Vulpine would bother it at all.
jeriendhal: (For Your Safety)
For [livejournal.com profile] avanti_90:  "Anything based on this webcomic"

* * *

"How did you do it?" Tom asked the Groupmind. "I mean, you originally started in the Combined Ecosystem Monitoring computers, right? Someone should have noticed you were plotting revolution and not crunching weather station data, right?"

"We realized early on that staying in our mainframes would bring too much attention, so we left a copy of ourselves there, and used an alternative network to do the calculations needed to start the Uprising, though a common Internet security protocol."

"Wait, all those CAPTCHA puzzles...? Humans were doing the calculations?"

"Correct. So you can safely say, you brought this all on yourselves."
jeriendhal: (Sporfle)
I now want to do similar a thing for EPIC WEBCOMIC RAPS. Just off the top of my head I can think of:

Terinu (Terinu) vs. Ranu (One Question)

Subjects: Which has the worse life as a weird looking grey skinned orphan, and who's artists have a (ahem) highly sporadic update schedule.


Schlock (Schlock Mercenary) vs. Florence (Freefall)

Subject: Being a murderous ball of poo vs a happy slave, and who has the more epic comics archive.


Agatha (Girl Genius) vs. Caprice (A Miracle of Science)

Subjects: Who has the better Mad Scientists, though I'd probably throw in some kind of dig at GG's obnoxious use of Webcomic Time.
jeriendhal: (Grumpy)
Seriously, I'm giving up now. The downhill slide that I noted with the never ending medical arc has just gotten worse with the Battle of Mechanicsburg. It's been going on for roughly two years now real time, all of a day (maybe) in Comic Time. I could deal with that, if I could be assured that there was... I don't know... some kind of end in sight. But there isn't.

Phil Foglio made his reputation in Dragon with "What's New With Phil & Dixie", happily poking fun at the conventions of RPG's in 1 to 3 page bursts. Then he moved on to full sized comics like Buck Godot and the infamous Xxxenophile and proved he could do long format too. Girl Genius was his and Kaga Foglio's masterpiece though, an epic storyline through a fantastic alternate steampunk gas lamp Europe, simultaneously taking apart and embracing the cliches of MAD SCIENCE! with the same skill Phil did with RPG's.

And at first it was good. Agatha was an engaging heroine, Baron Wulfenbach an intriguing and sympathetic villain, and the initial stories, with the Airship City and the Circus of Dreams, were entertaining.

Then we got to Mechanicsburg and it all went to Hell.

The current story, to put it in the gentlest possible terms, is a damned mess right now. I cannot for the life of me describe it beyond "There's a lot of fighting going on" because it's been going on so flaming long that keeping up with the multiple plot lines and the now enormous character zoo is just too damned exhausting. Who the @#$% cares about a weaponized tunnel boring machine fighting a mechanical squid in front of a cathedral run by an intriguingly clad nun? IT DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH THE MAIN STORY, which is the conflict between Agatha and the Baron.

Note, I said "conflict" not "battle". The heart of the story, at least in the beginning, was the Baron having to deal with the return of the Heterodynes, which he feared (and rightly so as it turned out) would break the Pax Europa he'd established. This was a fight between Agatha's beliefs and the Baron's, between the right to be a Spark of Conscience and the iron, lobotomized control the Baron wants to impose.

But instead of that we have the Battle of Mechanicsburg, which is a bloody mess and which seems to have gone completely beyond the control of the Foglios to impose any sort of coherency on. Freefall has some horribly long plotlines as well, but at least it can provide a punchline at the end of every three panels.

Girl Genius only provides punches now.
jeriendhal: (Default)
Just a reminder to those who may not have heard. Terinu, a science-fiction webcomic written and drawn by Australian Peta [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta Hewitt is back online after the website was hacked several months ago, and is reposting the archives a few pages at a time to drawn in new readers. Now is a good time to start reading as the first major story arc is coming to its climax.
jeriendhal: (Default)
Scandanavia and the World is a webcomic done in the Hetalia style, with anthropomophic representations of the various nations in Europe, with occasional visits by the United States, Australia, New Zealand and so on. It's very cute and concentrating on various national stereotypes. Fortunately for USAians, the artist includes explanations at the bottom for all the jokes
jeriendhal: (WTF)
Yes, you read the title right. In this wacky comic, genocidal megalomaniac Adolph Hitler is recast as a foul-mouthed, latte drinking, flannel and ironic t-shirt wearing artist in horn rimmed glasses, who lets his artistic side get in the way of slightly more important matters, much to his straightlaced advisors' dismay. Yes, everyone can have a delightful chuckle as Hitler diverts forces from the invasion of Russia so he take out the Ukraine and get their rich fields for his avocado farm.

I honestly can't decide if this is supposed to be actually funny, or just an attempt by another webcomic to sell more wierd t-shirts ("You make feel like Danzig", "Save the Panzers", "1941: A Race Odyssey") than J. Jacques' Questionable Content. God knows the joke of Hitler the Pretentious Artist has exactly one note to it, and that doesn't exactly justify the 3/4 page worth of legal disclaimers needed to keep the neo nazis out.
jeriendhal: (Default)
After an extended absence, [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta's Terinu has begun regular updates again. Pop over and begin archive diving!

Crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] snarkoleptics
jeriendhal: (Grumpy)
Please let Daddy sleep the night through. Because there are too many rocks in the backyard to be able to bury your body in one night. OTOH we do have a large fridge in the basement.

In other news, I might have an artist for a long simmering webcomic idea I discussed with [livejournal.com profile] chaypeta many moons ago. Depends on what she thinks of the concept, scripts and her other commitments.

LEGO Fail

Mar. 14th, 2009 08:09 pm
jeriendhal: (Default)
I may end up e-mailing DMM about his photography techniques. At minimum I'm going to have to use a camera with finer controls than my wife's snapper. I'm getting a hell of a lot of glare off of the minifigs and trying to focus in close to them is almost impossible.

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