jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
As predicted Civil Protection spent the rest of the afternoon and evening searching the garage for evidence left by the graffiti artist, to absolutely no effect. Questioning the staff was put off until the next morning, but with well over a hundred servants employed by their House, never mind an equal number of District administration employees coming and going every day, it was going to take some time.

Later the next morning, as the first round of questioning was beginning, Salli received a call from Rolas. She quickly rushed to her suite to bring it up on her comsole, to find her twin sitting in her office, dressed for the day in his House uniform.

“Good morning, Salli,” he greeted cheerfully. “I was just checking in to see how you and Alinadar are getting along.”

Salli's mouth hung open a moment as Rolas' completely ordinary question stopped her short. “That's... complicated at the moment,” she finally said.

To put it mildly )
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
Note: I'm changing the name of the story, as you can see. The evolving plot line isn't going quite in the direction I'd figured, and it needed something more appropriate.

* * *

The party finally began winding down an hour before midnight. Long practice from dealing with her late husband’s temper helped Salli keep the calm smile plastered on her face. There were no more questions about Alinadar, or commentary on the news article, Mother Goddess be praised. When the musical quartet in the corner began playing the traditional Fare the Well, Those Who Part to start shuffling all the guests out the door, she let out a covert sigh of relief.

Once the last of them had gone, and the quartet began packing up their instruments, Salli’s mother approached, smiling approvingly. “You did very well this evening, dear,” she said. It was only Salli’s imagination that insisted her mother’s tone resembled that of someone addressing a cub who’d successfully learned how to use the Necessary.

Lack of evidence is not proof of innocence )
jeriendhal: (Ali)
Trigger Warnings: Implied self-harm, discussion of child endangerment and suicide

Ali had kept running, out into the street, down the sidewalk, in a straight line away from Neka and Fin’s comfortable, safe little house, wondering when she was going to hear sirens behind her. Eventually she slowed down, her lungs burning, the fight or flight panic induced adrenaline surge fading as the lack of pursuit became evident. She’d run nearly six kilometers she estimated, stopping at the entrance to a pleasant looking wooded park, little paved paths running between the trees leading to secluded picnic and play areas.

She pricked up her ears, listening for sounds of laughter or other signs of children being nearby. When she was certain the park was empty, Ali stepped along one of the paths, turning down a branch randomly. She ended up at a circular wooden picnic table, built around the trunk of a meter wide tree. Hiding around the body of the trunk out of sight from the path, she sat down and began methodically stripping off her weapons. The knives she set aside in their sheaths. The palm stunner and its backup she kept hidden under her vest she pulled out, removed the power cartridges, and then methodically began to strip them down their component parts, until she was sure they were disabled. It took longer than normal. Her paws were shaking so badly that they kept slipping out of her fingers, dropping to the table, until she was finally able to lay out the disassembled bits of each weapon in a pair of neat lines parallel with the table’s wooden boards.

Stripped Bare )
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
The ballroom was in the new western wing of the manor, built in what Salli thought was rather self-consciously reflective of the Age of Airships, from the half-century preceding first contact with Humanity and the start of the Interstellar Era. The floor was tiled with white marble, broken up by geometric triangular patterns laid out in grey tile. Soaring overhead were arches of polished aluminum girders, circles punched out to invoke the ribbing of an airship’s frame. In one corner was a low stage, where a woodwind quartet was providing quiet dinner music for the twenty or so people already present, and at the opposite corner a bar and buffet.

“The Vicountess Sallivera Darktail!” a footman announced as she entered through the double doors. Salli, having taken the precaution of swallowing one of her tabs of optional anti-anxiety medication prior to dressing, did not break down in tears nor even flinch as every nose in the room turned towards the open double doors. Instead she acknowledged the guests with a polite nod, calling out, “Thank you all so much for coming,” to them, before sweeping into the room and bowing to Mother and Father. Behind her and through the double doors, she could just see Zaker turning away to walk up the hallways, presumably to take up her perimeter duties, now that she had delivered her prisoner to their fated punishment.

Awkward Social Situations, Ahoy! )
jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
“Not so tight,” Salli growled.

Nari flinched, and loosened the knot on the heavy silk sash around Salli's hips, twin to the governor's sash slung over her shoulder, the latter embroidered in green with a map of Greenholme's continents. “Sorry, Milady,” she muttered.

“It's all right,” Salli said, instantly contrite for snarling at a servant. “I just haven't worn these since... since the memorial ceremony back at the colony. When we scattered the ashes of victims of the pirate attack.”

That earned another flinch from Nari. “I suppose that would make for unhappy memories, Milady,” she said.

“Indeed.” She shrugged her shoulders, adjusting the hang of her dress as Nari moved behind her to take care of the remaining buttons, swishing her tail through the little flap stitched in her skirt. “Let's get this over with,” she muttered.

Stepping out of her suite, she found another irritation waiting for her on the settee. Zaker was sitting there, her usual smile on her muzzle.

“Shouldn't you be minding the perimeter?” Salli asked, willing her ears and tail to remain still.

“Will be soon,” Zaker said amiably, standing up to give her a brief bow. “First I'm to escort you to the ballroom.”

To make certain I bothered to show up, Salli concluded. “Let us go then.”

Zaker walked beside her down the hallway, as they headed towards the main staircase. “Y'know, I'm really not angling towards Blacksailor's job.”

“That's good, because you're not getting it,” she replied.

“Mind you, I'm not sure why she's got it. Bit of a loose cannon if you ask me.”

“I didn't,” Salli said evenly, trying not to grind her fangs together. “Alinadar, for the record, has an absolutely frightening amount of self-control. She has defended me from all manner of pirates and would-be kidnappers. I have seen her face down her greatest and most powerful tormentor, unarmed and dressed in only her pelt, and neither flinch nor falter. She is not a 'loose cannon.' She is my most stalwart defender, and her loyalty is unquestioning.”

Zaker raised her paws in defense. “All right, all right! I'm not arguing. But at least I'm not frightened of her like the other staff are.”

“Which of the staff?” Salli demanded.

The bodyguard shrugged. “Not my place to say, milady. I'm sorry.”

“The Mother Goddess you are,” Salli growled.

Could that be true? The other staff of the manor being frightened of Ali? But what did they know of her truly, beyond the terrible story of her enslavement and history of being a child soldier under Bloody Margo's command? Of being forced to murder other children, hiding the vents and small spaces of the innocent freighters the pirates attacked. They don't see as I do. See the wounds such an enslavement left on her soul. They only see the monster Bloody Margo wished to warp her into. They don't see the young vixen mourning all the corpses she had made, never able to wash their blood off her claws.

“If you don't want the truth, close your ears, Lady Salli,” Zaker said, her expression darkening. “But I won't lie to you.”

Salli nodded sharply, then went down the stairs to the waiting guests. It would be no torment, compared to what Ali had to face every day in the mirror.
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
Been a while since I've had been able to add enough new material to make posting something worthwhile. Enjoy.

* * *

Entering the house they split off, Ali heading towards the kitchen to grab breakfast for herself, and Salli going upstairs to her room to clean up and get properly dressed for the day. When the noblevixen reached it, she found a young serving vixen waiting for her, sitting on a settee across from her suite’s door.

“Nari, what are you doing here?” Salli asked. She tried not to let the lingering irritation from her conversation with Zaker enter her voice. Nari had been one of a series of servants who had kept a polite watch over Salli at her parent’s orders, during the dark days after her divorce and escape from her late husband Kev. How many hours had the girl sat on that very couch, making sure her leigelady’s daughter didn’t try to irreparably harm herself? As if Kev hadn’t done enough damage to her already.

Salli is not going to have a good morning. At all. )
jeriendhal: (Wazagan)
Editorial: In case it isn't obvious now from my writing, I have a real problem with a justice system that favors retribution over redemption. Because one side is Justice, and the other is nothing more than Vengeance.

Yes, some crimes are horrible. Some are outright unforgivable. But to sentence a man or woman in their teens or twenties, to spend the rest of their life in prison with no possibility of forgiveness or redemption is wrong. I am not the asshole I was at 15 or 20. I can't assume a sixty or seventy year old man is the same fool who committed a crime at thirty.

In the past few decades we've come down too hard on the side of vengeance over justice, order over the possibility of making genuine, forgivable, mistakes in judgement.

And that's wrong.

Cut for length and ranting )
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
The good news, I've got the climax all set in my head, with it partially written out below.

The bad news now I have to write all the bits in the middle to fit it.

Cut for major plot spoilers )
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
Summary: Average month for sales, at least of the ebooks. But the really exciting event of the month was the release of the audio book of CotRV. Seventeen sales total for that one, though I doubt I'm going to be doing that well with it for November, it was still heartening. Now if I could just get some reviews of it posted.


Things to Do: Getting my writing mojo on for Shadow of History. I'm going to try to get at least 500 words a day done on it, hopefully completing a significant chunk of it before the ed of the year, if not completing it.

Also I need to get the remaining rewards out to my Kickstarter supporters. Been falling behind mostly due to Life and trying to get the formatting fixed for the non-Kindle format ebooks.


Sales Report: KDP/KOLL


Captive of the Red Vixen: 7/3 (1/0 UK, 1/0 CA)

CotRV Audiobook: 17

For Your Safety: 4/0

Good Landing: 4*

I Fought the Claw & the Claw Won: 2/3 (1/0 UK)

Mimsey's Tale: 2/0

Prisoners of War: 2/1

Shadow of the Red Vixen: 1/ 2 (1/0 UK)

Shadow of Her Sins: 1/3 (1/0 UK)


Total Sales: 36/12

* Free ebook
jeriendhal: (Red Vixen)
They walked out into the docking bay in the opposite direction that Aunt Razi had taken, heading towards the private shuttle docks one level up and about a hundred meter spinward. Ali kept alert for traffic from the automated forklifts and contra-grav load plates that zoomed along, keeping herself between them and Lady Salli as they stuck to the marked pedestrian walk paths.

A short trip up the lift and they emerged into the passenger corridors of the station, with carpeting covering the floors and kiosks selling overpriced goods to a captive audience of transients every few meters. As they walked, Ali let go of Salli’s paw and scanned the crowd for threats. Though this was civilized Foxen Prime, far from the Free Territories or menacing pirates, she'd never falter at her job as Lady Salli's bodyguard, never mind being her beloved. One, after all, logically followed the other in her mind.

As they approached the security station leading to the shuttle docks, a gangly foxen in Commoner civilian clothing, with a recorder monocle pressed into his right eye and a press pass clipped to his belt, shoved off from the wall and approached them, smiling broadly. Ali stepped between him and Lady Salli as he approached, flexing her right wrist slightly in case she needed to suddenly drop her palm stunner from its holster hidden in the billowy sleeve of her shirt.

“Lady Darktail?” the commoner called. “Nef Clawstroke, Oceanic News. How ‘bout a picture for the newsnets?”

Ali caught the stiffening of Salli’s ears and tail, even as the latter answered calmly, “No thank you, young man.” The noblevixen kept walking forward towards the security station, and Ali perforce followed.

The news-hack walked in parallel to them, still smiling and talking, keeping his monocle focused on Salli. “Any comment as Greenholme’s Governor General, on the shocking attack on the colony?”

“It was terrible tragedy. I’m grateful for the assistance by the Foxen Navy and the Stellar Patrol in catching the pirates responsible, and preventing further casualties,” Salli replied smoothly, not breaking her stride.

“Did you lose your eye in the attack?” he pressed.

“All right, that’s enough,” Ali interrupted, coming to a halt and turning to face the news-hack, raising her paw to stiff arm him in the chest before he could follow Salli any further.

“Hey!” he exclaimed, raising his paws. “It's a legitimate question!”

“Ali,” Salli said softly in warning. “Not here.” Ali turned her head slightly in the other vixen's direction, catching in her peripheral vision the suddenly alert looks from the security guards just up ahead. She let her paw drop back down to her side, and Clawstroke wisely took a step back.

“I'm actually here to have my cyber eye repaired,” Salli told him, her tone cooling several degrees. “It was originally lost in an incident some three years ago, a fact you might have researched before confronting us. If you have any further questions I strongly advise you contact Darktail Domain's press office. Good day to you.” She turned away and started back towards the security station, Ali sparing the news-hack a withering glance over her shoulder before following.

“Are you all right, Salli?” she asked. Salli's ears and tail were still stiff with suppressed irritation, but not in deep upset, if Ali was reading her right.

“I'm fine,” Salli replied, flashing her Noble ident at a security guard's scanner plate as they passed through the VIP scan arch. Ali did the same, the arch giving a reluctant beep of approval as it acceptedthe implanted permits for her weapons.

“You're sure?”

“Yes, Ali,” Salli said, relaxing slightly as they entered the much less traveled corridor, heading towards the Darktail Domain's private shuttle dock. “The press may be at times irritating, but it does have its place. It keeps the members of the Council of Countesses honorable in their dealings with the Common Folk.”

“What about when the Countesses deal with each other?”

Salli touched her eye patch, smiling without much humor. “That tends to be a more private affair. Usually.”

TBC

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